Who is your character and where is it happening? Phillip Lombard – Limbo between heaven and hell
What is your inciting incident and how do you get there? Lombard meets another fellow limboian – they say there’s a gate there and a gate there one leads to heaven one leads to hell. You must make your decision on which path you take. but beware if you take the wrong path you
Where do you cross the threshold? He goes on his journey to find heaven with a risk of actually belonging hell
How does the action rise? he starts getting hunted down by heaven hunters
when does your main character get knocked down? The heaven hunters start appearing as all the people he has killed and this guilt overwhelms him and he ends up in heaven jail.
Why does your character get back up?